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Journal - October 28th, 2005 @ 4:47PM

Stories of the path less travelled.

All is quiet save for the terrific whoosh of air passing by the train as it speeds to its destination. The carriage is all but full, and each passenger sits calmly in their seats, lost in their own thoughts.

A young couple sits hand in hand, looking out the darkened window of the train.

She balls her fingers into a fist, pushes it in front of her co-passenger, thumb facing down. She mutters a few words, inaudible from here, but ends on a hopeful note. The young man turns his head slowly, a smile blossoming on his lips, and taps the bridge of his glasses up. He looks down at the hopeful fist and lets loose a few words. Gradually, growing more confident, the faint trickle grows to a waterfall of a speech; full bore. Still inaudible, but a whisper, he carries on. In what seems like a lull in the dialogue the young lady pulls the fist back her way to add something. (another question?) No; halfway through her interruption. Her (friend, partner, husband?) continues his speech. This time she lets him finish before punctuating the silence with a conjecture; here eyes wide with amusement. The young man reaches across, places his hands gently over her fist and tucks it neatly into her lap. They seem to stand still in the moment, cherishing it, in all its ephemeral sentiment. Slowly a smile blossoms on both their faces. A minute ((or two), or five?) passes. She looks away, serenely, continuing to smile. She looks down at her hand, and fidgets with the single gold band adorning her ring finger. After what seems like an hour she looks up and her gaze turns this way. I offer a knowing smile and she offers an embarrassed yet still dazzling smile. Not wanting to ruin this awkward moment, I turn to fiddle with my bag, and look out the darkened window of the train once again.

Jolly good!! By Asif



User Comments

Otherthought-fox
Date: October 30, 2005 @ 3:49 PM
Nice. Did you really witness this? Nice writing Nodding
Rockfarfor44
Date: November 2, 2005 @ 8:32 PM
Excellent writing RonThumbs UpDid you write this??if so then you're very goodNodding
RockKingOfFoolz
Date: November 2, 2005 @ 9:49 PM
arghh.. i knews it.. i forgot to put me name on it.. twas writen by me.. rons band mate.. sif..
Rockstrum
Date: November 3, 2005 @ 7:14 PM
eeeehehehhehe
Rockfarfor44
Date: November 6, 2005 @ 1:01 AM
So it,s Sif who is the literary genius,and Ron is the musical geniusNodding Lots of talent in the band thenNodding
this band is destined for greatnessThumbs Up
Rockstrum
Date: November 6, 2005 @ 12:06 PM
eeeeyeaaaa *rolls eyes*
RockKingOfFoolz
Date: November 6, 2005 @ 3:36 PM
A typical jam session for strum: We both sit down, pull out the guitars, and proceed to carry on a conversation about wether the orca (killer whale) is a whale or a dolphin; We're both stubborn bastards, so we never admit that the orca, of-course, falls under the species of freedomus willus (ooh scienceyy). Then we decide to write a song about elephants.. ohhhh the pain;the suffering;the shenanigans and general tomfoolery. We take turns at making up lyrics and singing; we take turns playing guitar bits. (not to mention telling each other we're stupid, crude and obtuse) The session soon comes to an end when we decide that playing any further might lead to something constructive. (THATS CRAZY TALK). Thats how it goes..
Rockstrum
Date: November 6, 2005 @ 3:39 PM
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KingOfFoolz:
hey guy... its been a while since i was on this site.. but i put up two songs on my page.... you've prolly heard them already.. but hey
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